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# Copy best practices

> What separates copy that works from copy that reads fine: leading with the specific thing, writing to the limit rather than trimming to it, and the failure modes that show up in review again and again.

Applied guidance for anyone writing to a [copy brief](/ad-copy-standards). The reasoning behind the brief's sections is in [copy brief concepts](/copy-brief-concepts); this page is what tends to go wrong in the writing itself.

## Specific beats impressive

The strongest line in most drafts is the one with a number, a name, or a mechanism in it. The weakest is the one that could describe any competitor.

A useful test: cover the logo. If a competitor could run the line unchanged, it isn't saying anything yet.

*Off-brand:* "Doughnut Labs helps teams work smarter."
*On-brand:* "Doughnut Labs gets a spreadsheet process running on its own by this afternoon."

## Write to the limit, don't trim to it

Copy drafted at a comfortable length and cut to fit loses the specific part and keeps the generic part, because the specific part is what takes words. Open the channel template first and write inside the count from the first draft.

The templates hold the real limits per format. They're linked from [write copy](/write-copy) and from each channel page.

## Lead with the change, not the feature

A reader is deciding whether to keep reading, and a feature name gives them nothing to decide with. Say what they can now do.

| Instead of                  | Write                                              |
| :-------------------------- | :------------------------------------------------- |
| "Introducing Smart Sync"    | "Your boards now update as your team works"        |
| "Powerful automation tools" | "Move a task to Done and the invoice sends itself" |
| "Best-in-class support"     | "Median first reply: 14 minutes"                   |

## Pull the message, don't write a new one

The key message comes from a pillar in [messaging](/messaging). A campaign where every asset carries a slightly different main idea reads as several campaigns, and none of them accumulates in anyone's memory.

Reordering emphasis for a different reader is fine. Inventing a new argument because the pillar felt stale in the third draft is not.

## Check the claim before you fall in love with the line

The best line in a draft is often the one that can't be substantiated. Check the approved claims table in [messaging](/messaging) before the line gets into a layout, because removing it after a designer has built around it costs a round.

Superlatives and comparisons need [legal review](/legal-review-process) regardless of how confident you are.

## Match the tone to the moment

[Brand voice and tone](/brand-voice-and-tone) stays the same across a launch email and an error message. The tone doesn't. Section 4 of that workbook pairs off-brand and on-brand versions of real lines, which is faster to check against than reasoning forward from voice traits.

## The recurring failures

| Failure                       | What it looks like                                             |
| :---------------------------- | :------------------------------------------------------------- |
| Writing the brief in the copy | The ad explains the strategy instead of speaking to the reader |
| Hedging                       | "Helps you to potentially reduce" instead of "cuts"            |
| Feature-first                 | The reader has to work out why they'd care                     |
| Unsupported superlative       | "The fastest way to" with no benchmark                         |
| Same hook everywhere          | A scroll-stopper reused as an email subject line               |
| CTA describing a mood         | "Discover more" instead of "Start a 14-day trial"              |

## Reuse before you write

Check the [copy drive](/copy-drive) first. A line that has already run has performance behind it and has cleared review, which a fresh draft does not.

## Related resources

* [**Write copy**](/write-copy) The full path from brief to filed copy.
* [**Copy brief**](/ad-copy-standards) The workbook.
* [**Copy brief concepts**](/copy-brief-concepts) Why each brief section exists.
* [**Brand voice and tone**](/brand-voice-and-tone) How the brand sounds.
* [**Messaging**](/messaging) Where the message and the claims come from.